Fan Fiction Corner

Hi everyone, Shodai Hokage here. I'm going to start up a Fan Fiction Corner where I'll be posting some fan fic on Naruto. You can help me out by posting some comments. They can include ideas on what to write about, what I could do better, or some stuff that I should have obviously included.
This first one is part of a short series, and it's on Lord Jiraiya.
Enjoy!

A Day in Jiraiya's Life (in his Academy years)...
-Woke up, had some ramen, went to the Academy
-Learned Bunshin no Jutsu... easy
-Instructors made us practice shuriken jutsu... Orochimaru was top of the class, as usual
-Lunch Break... asked Tsunade out, got punched
-Others made fun of me for bruise on face... maybe I should stop asking Tsunade out?
-Third Hokage showed up to teach some genjutsu... Orochimaru was selected, I wasn't... *pout*
-Third Hokage taught some taijutsu later on, he lost to Tsunade... (pervert)
-Academy ended, went home, had some fried chicken
-Went to sleep, will ask Tsunade out tomorrow